Monthly Archives: May 2013

Everyone keeps asking me if I’m “all done,” and I say “yes!” and then they say “are you really all done?” and I say “well, not really.” I am still getting grade-grubbing emails and still getting emails from my department … Continue reading →

– seems like 2 abrupt subject changes…. – not sure what this ‘way’ is – but not women?! People are crazy! – well, but the ballerina does this also – “the audience” is the subject of this sentence – incorrect … Continue reading →

– Fabulous intro! – What belief? – Muddy – Stay away from superlatives like this – Muddy! – unnecessary hyperbole – I wonder how much religion plays part–embarrassing, shameful, you can’t be buried in the church yard, etc. – redundant … Continue reading →