Paper Comments 3: The Final Batch: This Time It’s Personal

– seems like 2 abrupt subject changes….
– not sure what this ‘way’ is
– but not women?! People are crazy!
– well, but the ballerina does this also
– “the audience” is the subject of this sentence
– incorrect quote. I know because this is from my article I wrote
– yes! Another comparison might be: imagine the accompanying music of opera WITHOUT THE VOICES
– not all film music is like this
– like ballet music!
– ha! so true
– interesting! EDM as contemporary absolute music?
– good summary of complex weird ideas!
– he’s “feeling it” too
– nicely put
– yes! coming full circle = very elegant
– spot-on
– also reminds me of those Italian futurists who rode their bicycles into WWI
– these feel like random examples
– figure out how to spell his name!
– don’t use this word, it’s not a word, it’s biz-speak
– so, the theatrical versions didn’t involve hymns?
– it’s actually “Fear of a Black Planet”
– wow
– need a citation and explanation–don’t take it for granted that your reader is familiar with Vietnamese political systems of the 1960s
– comes out of nowhere!!
– Fabulous! Ha ha ha!
– cool
– YIKES
– Unbelievable!!
– Heavy, evocative, grotesque analogy