Paper Comments

– tight intro!
– nice
– single-space block quotes
– Fun!
– Wow! 99?!
– dangling modifier
– did he deny this?
– good point
– nice title!
– Great names
– I love this
– match made in heaven
– yes, really what is the diff between the modernists and Frank Zappa? guitars?
– love this hair and lint image
– Wait, are you still talking about Trout Mask Replica?
– Probably Schoenberg wouldn’t have liked Captain Beefheart, actually
– that poor woman
– good interpretation
– where does this quote start?
– this font is too big
– didn’t know he was self-loathing in this way
– elaborate on this? How are trumpets about strength exactly
– single-space block quotes
– non-sequitur
– muddy
– ??
– Ha! Oh Maxie
– you keep introducing him over and over. After your first mention, just say “Marley”
– literally??
– what does this quote have to do with the Rastafarian colors
– quote isn’t about freedom; more about evil
– do you mean Jah?
– I’m sure that’s true
– how have you shown him distancing himself from Russia?
– single-space block quotes
– an upbringing really isn’t “an event”
– dangling modifier
– unnecessary! we know he becomes a songwriter
– ?? can’t start out of nowhere like this!!
– this kills me
– isn’t this the one they called “muddle instead of music”?
– weird story, have you read it? child spirit visits woman in erotic dreams; priest banishes it; it curses her husband’s fishing net
– what? youtube?
– how is this not proof of his ignorance?
– not sure this is considered an illness
– cite where this is coming from!
– really?!
– be consistent
– abrupt and shocking; don’t suddenly compare him to Beethoven
– lively!
– bold
– what a character!
– ornamented and ornate
– I love this but you haven’t established why Rococo was associated with selfishness
– weird way of putting this
– how are soul-eating cameras Mormon?
– rephrase
– drugs
– how did the music (i.e. not the lyrics) seem insane
– amazing quote
– if you want to weigh in like this, don’t be so pointed
– they didn’t ever get married
– they didn’t have children! She had two from a previous dude
– :(
– whoa!
– yes–didn’t he have a reach of an octave and a half? it’s unimaginable
– oh boy!
– Fétis is also an old-school Frenchy–the French (save Berlioz) were not necessarily that into Beethoven
– classic Wagner! he hates people
– can’t use wikipedia as a source
– you need to find better sources to read!
– proofread!
– yes, but you were just talking about Pablo Honey, so this is confusing chronologically
– what exactly does the computer add?
– tight intro
– single-space block quotes
– wow
– I wonder what he defines as an asshole?