The way it reads is allright. Not such a big fan of those black squares though. Maybe try going grey with one of them? It might be the way they are sized too, and that the A in art touches the side of the one. I like that you are trying to break the white space up with them, but those little white line negative spaces (especially the bottom and top ones. Not so much with the middle one.) are just a little too thin to be read as intentional even though I assume they were. Also, maybe try shrinking the "Art Factory" text just a hair? I don't think you would lose the emphasis if the black boxes are still enclosing the text. These may all be bad crits, but just trying to help :)
Among my "cyber-friends" (AKA "CONTACTS" ACROSS THE WORLD-WIDE SOCIAL MEDIUM PLATFORMS) we will prob. abbrev. (shorten) the name like this: F.ART.Y to conserve the limited number of text space resources to be consumed (140 Maximum).
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Among my "cyber-friends" (AKA "CONTACTS" ACROSS THE WORLD-WIDE SOCIAL MEDIUM PLATFORMS) we will prob. abbrev. (shorten) the name like this: F.ART.Y to conserve the limited number of text space resources to be consumed (140 Maximum).
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G.ART.Y
ha! Thx