http://urbanhonking.com/cowboyz/2004/01/31/dave_elsewhere_is_totally_in_y/ Fri, 14 Oct 2016 21:37:10 +0000 hourly 1 http://urbanhonking.com/cowboyz/2004/01/31/dave_elsewhere_is_totally_in_y/#comment-12 Wed, 16 Feb 2005 17:15:14 +0000 http://urbanhonking.com/cowboyz/2004/01/31/dave_elsewhere_is_totally_in_y/#comment-12 Hey man your review is good, but each paragraph doesn’t stick to a certian subject, it doesn’t flow rite. For example in da second paragraph, you talk a little bit about the setting and the characters, then you switch to talkin about Basketball jerseys and players?

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